Oh wow this was such a delicious treat!! The voice acting nailed it lol sexy and growly and that dream sex... Damn! This is exactly what I always look for but can never find. Please continue with this as its truly amazing!
Oh my gosh, this is just incredible. This is aiofjsdkkjfl;ajflaskfjasdfj. This is amazing. I cannot believe.. like.. wtf.. this is so good. I cannot wait for the full release. There is so much going on - even if there wasn’t such a character (that I’m absolutely in love with), even if there wasn’t such an awesome setting, even if there wasn’t this intense and suspenseful mystery/situation keeping me at the edge of my seat, even if there wasn’t an impeccable chemistry, even if there’s wasn’t an immaculate sexytime… having all this together? This is crazy. This is just too good. Oh goodness, I cannot wait for more. This is wonderful. So well-done, so well-done. Thank you so much. This is so amazing. Keep up the good work!
agrguhre your words mean so much to me! I'm so pleased to read everything you've written and it really does warm my heart. I will try to keep impressing you with the rest of the game <3
I love this!! I love the MC (not a damsel in distress and can hold her own), love Alvarez (a hardass but with reason and isn't constantly closed off), and love the plot.
That dream sex scene was the hottest thing I've ever seen in a VN, and I can't wait for more!
Like any of us she needs people to rely on, but she is not easily beaten at all! I like to think she plays her cards close to her chest though, and lets people underestimate her!
That is a compliment I will hold VERY dear, as the sex scenes are super important to me! They will only get hotter and more explicit (with explicit CGs too) so, hope you will enjoy them when they come!
More explicit, you say? Well, I will make sure to check back often to make sure I don't miss anything. Dropped a tip in your kofi, too. I can't wait to see more! And I do love the story, too. I'm hoping the MC will get to save Alvarez right back. ;-)
First, this was a very polished experience! I appreciated how the backgrounds blended in with the GUI and how the overall felt sensual and in theme with the erotic scene that concludes the demo! The sprite art and the mini-CGs were also great!
I also enjoyed a lot the story! I'm definitely interesting in uncovering what happened during these experiments, who is behind it, why they are recruiting children (as I understood in Hanna's case at least)...
Alvarez was a very interesting character to interact with! He was mysterious and distant without being mean and obnoxious. It's really not an easy thing to do, as "distant" characters tend to be very horrible with the MC. Here, it wasn't the case, and I appreciated that. I also loved his interactions with Hana!
This is a very solid demo, with a very promising storyline!!
The game was super well written, and the visuals, music, and GUI were all amazingly polished!
I also loved the added secrecy behind their backstories, and how we as readers get to slowly open up to him and vice versa - makes things feel more natural, and gives us a lot of good banter between the two of them!
(If you are okay with all the content warnings present and are 18+ please give this game a shot, you won't be disappointment, I swear! It's 5/5 stars for a reason.)
I've loved this project since I read it initially, I always recommend it as what Fifty Shades of Grey should have been! The setting is far more interesting, the BDSM/Daddy-dom culture is handled with actual care, and the characters are incredibly interesting in every way!
Not to mention some cute romance from such a stoic guy in Alvarez!
Watching this come together is just exactly how I imagined and yet so much better as well?
The art is fire! It's hot, and beautiful! The music selections were great for this project. And Alvarez' voice actor had me swooningggg, so deep and rugged. What a time to be alive, truly.
The story is really paced so well, and showcases your strengths in bringing together two strong characters in a super interesting and satisfying way!
I'm so glad to have been able to enjoy the story before now, and I hope it captures your player's hearts the way it captured mine.
Alvarez captured my heart and is keeping it tied down somewhere, but that's exactly where I want it to be.
uM? AMAZING! I LOVE IT<33 I LOVE Alvarez and Mc's Relationship! and the way it develops and alvarez showing his soft side to our mc omg- you really did a very good job in this one
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Oh wow this was such a delicious treat!! The voice acting nailed it lol sexy and growly and that dream sex... Damn! This is exactly what I always look for but can never find. Please continue with this as its truly amazing!
The voice acting is FANTASTIC, and I'm so glad this pleased you! Hope to feed you more in future!
I haven't found a game i liked in a long time but this was amazing like i have no words i hope to see more! beautiful work
Thank you so much <3
Oh my gosh, this is just incredible. This is aiofjsdkkjfl;ajflaskfjasdfj. This is amazing. I cannot believe.. like.. wtf.. this is so good. I cannot wait for the full release. There is so much going on - even if there wasn’t such a character (that I’m absolutely in love with), even if there wasn’t such an awesome setting, even if there wasn’t this intense and suspenseful mystery/situation keeping me at the edge of my seat, even if there wasn’t an impeccable chemistry, even if there’s wasn’t an immaculate sexytime… having all this together? This is crazy. This is just too good. Oh goodness, I cannot wait for more. This is wonderful. So well-done, so well-done. Thank you so much. This is so amazing. Keep up the good work!
agrguhre your words mean so much to me! I'm so pleased to read everything you've written and it really does warm my heart. I will try to keep impressing you with the rest of the game <3
I love this!! I love the MC (not a damsel in distress and can hold her own), love Alvarez (a hardass but with reason and isn't constantly closed off), and love the plot.
That dream sex scene was the hottest thing I've ever seen in a VN, and I can't wait for more!
Like any of us she needs people to rely on, but she is not easily beaten at all! I like to think she plays her cards close to her chest though, and lets people underestimate her!
That is a compliment I will hold VERY dear, as the sex scenes are super important to me! They will only get hotter and more explicit (with explicit CGs too) so, hope you will enjoy them when they come!
More explicit, you say? Well, I will make sure to check back often to make sure I don't miss anything. Dropped a tip in your kofi, too. I can't wait to see more! And I do love the story, too. I'm hoping the MC will get to save Alvarez right back. ;-)
this is so amazing! i love the tension and the build up between the two, it makes it all so much more interesting. Can't wait to see more from you!
Thank you so much, so glad to hear. First time writing anything... like this? So I'm glad the tension is working! Hope to keep delivering for you <3
Hey! I played the demo!
First, this was a very polished experience! I appreciated how the backgrounds blended in with the GUI and how the overall felt sensual and in theme with the erotic scene that concludes the demo! The sprite art and the mini-CGs were also great!
I also enjoyed a lot the story! I'm definitely interesting in uncovering what happened during these experiments, who is behind it, why they are recruiting children (as I understood in Hanna's case at least)...
Alvarez was a very interesting character to interact with! He was mysterious and distant without being mean and obnoxious. It's really not an easy thing to do, as "distant" characters tend to be very horrible with the MC. Here, it wasn't the case, and I appreciated that. I also loved his interactions with Hana!
This is a very solid demo, with a very promising storyline!!
Thank you! Hanna would've been 18 at the time of her recruitment (still very baby though!)
Writing Alvarez is a fine balance with a lot of fun, thank you for playing and for your kind words <3
The game was super well written, and the visuals, music, and GUI were all amazingly polished!
I also loved the added secrecy behind their backstories, and how we as readers get to slowly open up to him and vice versa - makes things feel more natural, and gives us a lot of good banter between the two of them!
Thank you so much! 🥺 Lots more secrets to unfold too 👀
Thank you !! He is the loml for real 😭
I noticed that Alvarez's VA isn't credited in the game or on the game page, is that intentional?
Yes for now! If/when the VA is comfortable being credited, they will be added to the page!
Good to know, thanks for responding :)
(If you are okay with all the content warnings present and are 18+ please give this game a shot, you won't be disappointment, I swear! It's 5/5 stars for a reason.)
I've loved this project since I read it initially, I always recommend it as what Fifty Shades of Grey should have been! The setting is far more interesting, the BDSM/Daddy-dom culture is handled with actual care, and the characters are incredibly interesting in every way!
Not to mention some cute romance from such a stoic guy in Alvarez!
Watching this come together is just exactly how I imagined and yet so much better as well?
The art is fire! It's hot, and beautiful! The music selections were great for this project. And Alvarez' voice actor had me swooningggg, so deep and rugged. What a time to be alive, truly.
The story is really paced so well, and showcases your strengths in bringing together two strong characters in a super interesting and satisfying way!
I'm so glad to have been able to enjoy the story before now, and I hope it captures your player's hearts the way it captured mine.
Alvarez captured my heart and is keeping it tied down somewhere, but that's exactly where I want it to be.
Joy, my heart ;__; thank you so much for such incredibly kind words ❤️
uM? AMAZING! I LOVE IT<33 I LOVE Alvarez and Mc's Relationship! and the way it develops and alvarez showing his soft side to our mc omg- you really did a very good job in this one
Thank youuuuu, even more softness to come <3
This was so good! I am really excited for more! Really love the banter between Alvarez and MC!
Thank you so much <3 Writing them is a lot of fun!