First, this was a very polished experience! I appreciated how the backgrounds blended in with the GUI and how the overall felt sensual and in theme with the erotic scene that concludes the demo! The sprite art and the mini-CGs were also great!
I also enjoyed a lot the story! I'm definitely interesting in uncovering what happened during these experiments, who is behind it, why they are recruiting children (as I understood in Hanna's case at least)...
Alvarez was a very interesting character to interact with! He was mysterious and distant without being mean and obnoxious. It's really not an easy thing to do, as "distant" characters tend to be very horrible with the MC. Here, it wasn't the case, and I appreciated that. I also loved his interactions with Hana!
This is a very solid demo, with a very promising storyline!!
The game was super well written, and the visuals, music, and GUI were all amazingly polished!
I also loved the added secrecy behind their backstories, and how we as readers get to slowly open up to him and vice versa - makes things feel more natural, and gives us a lot of good banter between the two of them!
(If you are okay with all the content warnings present and are 18+ please give this game a shot, you won't be disappointment, I swear! It's 5/5 stars for a reason.)
I've loved this project since I read it initially, I always recommend it as what Fifty Shades of Grey should have been! The setting is far more interesting, the BDSM/Daddy-dom culture is handled with actual care, and the characters are incredibly interesting in every way!
Not to mention some cute romance from such a stoic guy in Alvarez!
Watching this come together is just exactly how I imagined and yet so much better as well?
The art is fire! It's hot, and beautiful! The music selections were great for this project. And Alvarez' voice actor had me swooningggg, so deep and rugged. What a time to be alive, truly.
The story is really paced so well, and showcases your strengths in bringing together two strong characters in a super interesting and satisfying way!
I'm so glad to have been able to enjoy the story before now, and I hope it captures your player's hearts the way it captured mine.
Alvarez captured my heart and is keeping it tied down somewhere, but that's exactly where I want it to be.
uM? AMAZING! I LOVE IT<33 I LOVE Alvarez and Mc's Relationship! and the way it develops and alvarez showing his soft side to our mc omg- you really did a very good job in this one
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Hey! I played the demo!
First, this was a very polished experience! I appreciated how the backgrounds blended in with the GUI and how the overall felt sensual and in theme with the erotic scene that concludes the demo! The sprite art and the mini-CGs were also great!
I also enjoyed a lot the story! I'm definitely interesting in uncovering what happened during these experiments, who is behind it, why they are recruiting children (as I understood in Hanna's case at least)...
Alvarez was a very interesting character to interact with! He was mysterious and distant without being mean and obnoxious. It's really not an easy thing to do, as "distant" characters tend to be very horrible with the MC. Here, it wasn't the case, and I appreciated that. I also loved his interactions with Hana!
This is a very solid demo, with a very promising storyline!!
Thank you! Hanna would've been 18 at the time of her recruitment (still very baby though!)
Writing Alvarez is a fine balance with a lot of fun, thank you for playing and for your kind words <3
The game was super well written, and the visuals, music, and GUI were all amazingly polished!
I also loved the added secrecy behind their backstories, and how we as readers get to slowly open up to him and vice versa - makes things feel more natural, and gives us a lot of good banter between the two of them!
Thank you so much! 🥺 Lots more secrets to unfold too 👀
Thank you !! He is the loml for real 😭
I noticed that Alvarez's VA isn't credited in the game or on the game page, is that intentional?
Yes for now! If/when the VA is comfortable being credited, they will be added to the page!
Good to know, thanks for responding :)
(If you are okay with all the content warnings present and are 18+ please give this game a shot, you won't be disappointment, I swear! It's 5/5 stars for a reason.)
I've loved this project since I read it initially, I always recommend it as what Fifty Shades of Grey should have been! The setting is far more interesting, the BDSM/Daddy-dom culture is handled with actual care, and the characters are incredibly interesting in every way!
Not to mention some cute romance from such a stoic guy in Alvarez!
Watching this come together is just exactly how I imagined and yet so much better as well?
The art is fire! It's hot, and beautiful! The music selections were great for this project. And Alvarez' voice actor had me swooningggg, so deep and rugged. What a time to be alive, truly.
The story is really paced so well, and showcases your strengths in bringing together two strong characters in a super interesting and satisfying way!
I'm so glad to have been able to enjoy the story before now, and I hope it captures your player's hearts the way it captured mine.
Alvarez captured my heart and is keeping it tied down somewhere, but that's exactly where I want it to be.
Joy, my heart ;__; thank you so much for such incredibly kind words ❤️
uM? AMAZING! I LOVE IT<33 I LOVE Alvarez and Mc's Relationship! and the way it develops and alvarez showing his soft side to our mc omg- you really did a very good job in this one
Thank youuuuu, even more softness to come <3
This was so good! I am really excited for more! Really love the banter between Alvarez and MC!
Thank you so much <3 Writing them is a lot of fun!