This was super hot and satisfying despite being short. Definitely looking forward to more. Too bad my bar/club experiences of my youth weren't as good as this. Thanks for this creation!
i enjoyed this a lot! i think the only thing that bothered me was genitals(vag)= fem wording when i choose he/him. other then that this really had me wanting more though! :3
sure! when i choose he/him but choose vagina as an option for genitals i noticed things like heels and dress vs when i went back and decided to do he/him with penis it was masc terms, boots etc. this only bothered me cause im trans π keep up the good work!
This was really good! You never disappoint, which is why I rushed to grab this one when I saw it. It was hot, oddly sweet at times, and a quick, fun read. I can't wait to see what you do next!
I don't know what I was expecting when I opened this game, but I was pleasantly surprised! loved the story so far, and I'd like to see where this goes next. Also it would be nice if we had more shots of Lucian on the screen as we play. Waiting for the sequel!!!!!!!!<3
Hello I would like to politely request you have the sequel on my desk by tomorrow morning please and thank you.
But seriously this was great and Iβd love to see what happens to the narrator after getting taken by our new babe. If you ever want to continue this Iβd love to read more, but thank you so much for making this in the first place!
this game is sooo fun!! i absolutely adore him already! im glad i found this game very early on!! β€ 10/10 game! also a feel like his va (not saying va is a must!) but i feel like his voice would be very close to sounding like "Ronin" from "Killer Chat"! <3
Lucian is so cute! π₯° Love a hot villain like him!
Also thank you so much for adding all these choices to customize the personality of our character! I almost never have the option to be a shy cinnamon roll around bad boys in otome π€ The smut was a wonderful addition too, I absolutely loved it!
aww thank you! AND lol i so appreciate people having sassy mc's but as a subby little bean... i had to have those choices too!! thanks for your lovely words! <3
Really nicely done! Interactivity is what makes or breaks a lot of things for me lately, so it was a lot of fun to have so many choices! Just enough variation to make different playthroughs feel unique and interesting, not an easy feat with a short story! I also really appreciate some well-written smut and I love me a nightlife scene -- I'll be paying attention to what you do in the future!
Thank you for your lovely comment, your kind words mean so much!! (I'm so glad that the trance like state translated ;) ) If you could please do me a favour and spoiler your comment on the sex scene that would be great <3 (just so no one feels spoiled by it ty!!)
Thank you. Sadly the spoiler setting html doesn't seem to work for me so I had to delete it. My apologies, I didn't realise my mistake. Thanks for informing me.
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noooo Just when it got more interesting the game ended I want moreeeeee
It's P with a plot, what more could a girl ask for? Thx for your work!
Thanks for playing :)
This was super hot and satisfying despite being short. Definitely looking forward to more. Too bad my bar/club experiences of my youth weren't as good as this. Thanks for this creation!
Thabk you for playing!!
i enjoyed this a lot! i think the only thing that bothered me was genitals
(vag)= fem wording when i choose he/him. other then that this really had me wanting more though! :3Hi! Do you mind clarifying so can improve this? π
sure! when i choose he/him but choose vagina as an option for genitals i noticed things like heels and dress vs when i went back and decided to do he/him with penis it was masc terms, boots etc. this only bothered me cause im trans π keep up the good work!
surprised me with how good the narration and choices are. this was wild
Thank you!!
Niceee, I liked the choices
can we peg him...
yknow what, fuck it, hes subbing for a scene in the sequel
Are there only two endings? Also, omggg! Love this game >W<
theres like, two major endings with a few different text changes but, theres not a huuuge diff! its the journey, not the destination ;)
I kinda want more of this lmao
<3 there will be more
Incredibly well written! as a straight guy, I've never been so attracted to a man. 10/10 for making me question my sexuality.
OMGGG???? HELPSKSJSJ THIS IS WHOLESOME
The honesty tho... <3
i might have to print this and frame it tbh
this was so good I loved lucienπ I love the mid sex transformation 10/10 would experience again
i love how you can tell that this written by a woman because he says and does everything right ππ€
can't wait for the sequel π
LMAO including the ending?? :') thats true, thats what the girlies want <3
GAHHH WHAT IS THIS CLIFFHANGER!? HES WORRIED ABOUT US??? I THOUGHT THIS MAN WAS EVIL GIMME MORE
cant we be evil and empathetic??? or is that just manipulation... hehe
Damnnnn, This is hot! totally bite-sized hotsho(r)t!!! Now I need to see his 'performance' with his demon form... thx you so much, chef
im frothing at the mouth thinking of the demon form too lmao
thank you!! (for us orgasmically challenged ppl lol)
I NEED HIM SO BADDDDDD THERE'S GOTTA BE A SEQUEL PLANNED. PLSPLSPLSSSSS
laughing evily (there is!!) <3
Loved it!! Do you plan to continue the game, or is it like a one shot? π
I plan on a follow up for sure! <3
This was really good! You never disappoint, which is why I rushed to grab this one when I saw it. It was hot, oddly sweet at times, and a quick, fun read. I can't wait to see what you do next!
Thank you, always so happy to see your name in my notifs β€οΈ
I beg of you I need a sequel. I need to know more that cliffhanger was nasty JK but seriously I need more looooore
im cooking (but also i love a cliffhanger, when i write fic im know for them aizndei SORRY!)
*looks at the character I used for this* ... She'll be aight
Welp. Great writing btw. Really liked it. As s Smut writer myself this is good quality stuff. 9.8/10
And I don't give that high a rating often
pretty red haired man say anything i say yes!!
thank you!! now off to work to earn my extra 0.2 points π
Look forward to giving a 10/10 for ya.
Maybe, if it's good enough. It'll be an 11/10 or higher. Who knows. Only time will tell
Yours truly
-The Yeetus Lord
Hello, yes officer, I would like that man obliterated, thank you <3 <3 <3
like.... pegging au or π«?? ππ (valid either way)
I don't know what I was expecting when I opened this game, but I was pleasantly surprised! loved the story so far, and I'd like to see where this goes next. Also it would be nice if we had more shots of Lucian on the screen as we play. Waiting for the sequel!!!!!!!!<3
aww thank you! will definitely consider more art for the sequel! <3
Hello I would like to politely request you have the sequel on my desk by tomorrow morning please and thank you.
But seriously this was great and Iβd love to see what happens to the narrator after getting taken by our new babe. If you ever want to continue this Iβd love to read more, but thank you so much for making this in the first place!
IF I COULD WRITE THAT FAST I SWEAR
(I may or may not have just switched tabs from a certain document, hehe)
Thanks so much for playing and enjoying! <3
very good!
thank you!
DAMN.
damn right back at you!!
this game is sooo fun!! i absolutely adore him already! im glad i found this game very early on!! β€ 10/10 game! also a feel like his va (not saying va is a must!) but i feel like his voice would be very close to sounding like "Ronin" from "Killer Chat"! <3
hehe Well Jett who plays Ronin would be suited since Luc is british <3 thanks for the kind comments
Lucian is so cute! π₯° Love a hot villain like him!
Also thank you so much for adding all these choices to customize the personality of our character! I almost never have the option to be a shy cinnamon roll around bad boys in otome π€
The smut was a wonderful addition too, I absolutely loved it!
Thank you for making this game!
aww thank you! AND lol i so appreciate people having sassy mc's but as a subby little bean... i had to have those choices too!! thanks for your lovely words! <3
If it's not too much, please set the language to Portuguese - Brazil, so I can play, because I am interested in the game. ;)
Hi! This would require a translator which I currently dont have access to, im sorry!
is there a option to save?
there isn't! the game isn't that long so i didn't think a save function was necesarry but i can always add one if if so!
thank you!
Really nicely done! Interactivity is what makes or breaks a lot of things for me lately, so it was a lot of fun to have so many choices! Just enough variation to make different playthroughs feel unique and interesting, not an easy feat with a short story! I also really appreciate some well-written smut and I love me a nightlife scene -- I'll be paying attention to what you do in the future!
Ahh im glad you enjoyed the choices! happy to have you around :) <3
I really love it! The good end that I get is so good!!! π₯°π₯°π₯°
thank you!!
I really liked the writing, it made me want to play more and written very well! I loved how interactive it was 10/10 <3
Thank you <3!
i did like this and the mamy decisions you can make ingame
Thank you!!
This makes it so much easier to track the reading and I love the interactiveness of the scenes!
Thank you!
This was really good. I cant say much due to spoilers though. The game felt like a trance, very mysterious and foreboding.
Thank you for your lovely comment, your kind words mean so much!!
(I'm so glad that the trance like state translated ;) )
If you could please do me a favour and spoiler your comment on the sex scene that would be great <3 (just so no one feels spoiled by it ty!!)
Thank you. Sadly the spoiler setting html doesn't seem to work for me so I had to delete it. My apologies, I didn't realise my mistake. Thanks for informing me.
I'm sorry !! Thank you β€οΈ